Of all the translations of Charles Baudelaire's Rêve parisien that I have read, this version is my favorite.
Parisian Dream
I
That marvelous landscape of my dream —
Which no eye knows, nor ever will —
At moments, wide awake, I seem
To grasp, and it excites me still.
Sleep, how miraculous you are —
A strange caprice had urged my hand
To banish, as irregular,
All vegetation from that land;
And, proud of what my art had done,
I viewed my painting, knew the great
Intoxicating monotone
Of marble, water, steel and slate.
Staircases and arcades there were
In a long labyrinth, which led
To a vast palace; fountains there
Were gushing gold, and gushing lead.
And many a heavy cataract
Hung like a curtain, — did not fall,
As water does, but hung, compact,
Crystal, on many a metal wall.
Tall nymphs with Titan breasts and knees
Gazed at their images unblurred,
Where groves of colonnades, not trees,
Fringed a deep pool where nothing stirred.
Blue sheets of water, left and right,
Spread between quays of rose and green,
To the world's end and out of sight,
And still expanded, though unseen.
Enchanted rivers, those — with jade
And jasper were their banks bedecked;
Enormous mirrors, dazzled, made
Dizzy by all they did reflect.
And many a Ganges, taciturn
And heedless, in the vaulted air,
Poured out the treasure of its urn
Into a gulf of diamond there.
As architect, it tempted me
To tame the ocean at its source;
And this I did, — I made the sea
Under a jeweled culvert course.
And every color, even black,
Became prismatic, polished, bright;
The liquid gave its glory back
Mounted in iridescent light.
There was no moon, there was no sun, —
For why should sun and moon conspire
To light such prodigies? — each one
Blazed with its own essential fire!
A silence like eternity
Prevailed, there was no sound to hear;
These marvels all were for the eye,
And there was nothing for the ear.
II
I woke; my mind was bright with flame;
I saw the cheap and sordid hole
I live in, and my cares all came
Burrowing back into my soul.
Brutally the twelve strokes of noon
Against my naked ear were hurled;
And a gray sky was drizzling down
Upon this sad, lethargic world.
— Edna St. Vincent Millay, Flowers of Evil (NY: Harper and Brothers, 1936)
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Thursday, October 16, 2008
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Long read, but interesting at best. =]
Have you ever read Pierre Berton? I did a history project on him. He's a very famous Canadian author. Well, maybe not famous if you've never heard of him
Hello Mayonaise. How are you? Great choice of poet and translation.
A silence like eternity
Prevailed, there was no sound to hear;
These marvels all were for the eye,
And there was nothing for the ear.
This is my favorite excerpt from this piece.
Beautiful.
Hi Mayo,
How are you tonight?
PH,
That was my favorite line too.
Right, well I hope it's not too obvious of me to pop in here, but I can't not. I have to say, This is one of my favorites, and this is also my favorite translation. I love Baudelaire and even though I've seen some translations of his work by others that I've liked better than hers, for this one, I agree, it's the best.
Did that make sense?
Anyway, it's good to see you around and thank you for this choice.
Hope you're doing well and are enjoying the season, and I hope you got some pumpkins. :)
Hello
Hey Anons, Solly, and K. =]
Haha, man, was I surprised that I was first to comment. I just got home from work and BAM! New post. It's really beautiful, and I wish that I could write something even a tenth of this.
Bonjour MJ.
(-=
Okay, wait, one more thing, because I always found this funny. I remember coming across this years ago.
Millay's translation of "Couldst Thou Not Hurl THe Universe" (which, okay, is funny in and of itself,) which begins, "Couldst thou not hurl the universe into a jewel, oh impure woman!" I remember seeing translated in a much simpler and more straightforward way:
"You'd take the whole world to bed with you, you harlot!"
Wish I could remember who did that one.
Anyway, again, thank you Mayo. :)
Hi MJ, Jules, Anon
Mayo, I love that poem. Thank you.
Hi everyone! :)
Solly, more poetry days tomorrow? I'm inspired now. ^_^
Hello Mayo
Good to see you. Life treating you okay?
Nice choice..... but I wonder what caused you to choose this.
Jules,
It's funny because I was thinking exactly that! Poetry will rule tomorrow and the next day and the next....
Tall nymphs with Titan breasts and knees
Gazed at their images unblurred,
Where groves of colonnades, not trees,
Fringed a deep pool where nothing stirred.
And stop talking dirty about us.
Just kidding.
Good Evening, Elena. =)
Sorry to anyone if I sound a little sour today. I've been lacking a few hours of sleep, and it's that time of the month.
>.<
Hey there DW! =)
ugh dumbass porchies obviously come in the second they know mayo is online.
you're not funny, stop trying.
Hey Paperheart, K, Sdock, D-Weed, anons and Martha.
Nice to see all of you.
hello everyone.
hello mayo, a new post and poetry as well. lovely. :)
but your title is a little...startling.
And stop talking dirty about us.
You wish Porkie.
Salutations, Toujours. =)
Nice job Mayo, now they think they can post all the poetry they want again. Asshole
Hey everyone
hi there paperheart. you actually sound pretty cheerful. :)
Hey TJ
How's it going?
this post is boring.
Hey BC!
TJ, I'm trying! lol. I have a quite the plate full for the time being.
hi elena. it's going.
how are you?
Blogger Kapunua said...
Mayo and S(S)S, today I have Leonard Cohen for both of you. Just words. On a day like today, to me anyway, there is nothing finer to share than Leonard Cohen.
Over on the porch we are doing poetry, lyrics, original and by others; quotes, pretty much anything. You know how we're all into that stuff over there. Well, as it always does, it has me feeling the whole word-love so hard, and so, who else to leave here, with you, than Mr. Cohen? Because to me, he's truly the lord of song."
*sighs*
*sakes head*
Je ne reve plus parce que il me rappelle de ces temps quand je pourrais aimer.
'Allo?
-A
Sorry I disappeared had to restart my computer.
Elena, Ph Sd, Kapu, Dw, Tj and anons
desperate for attention of any kind
This is encouraging everything that goes against Amy's Fix.
Good going Mayo. Asshole.
Hello BC sorry I missed you
i want to read Mayo's own words and now we're going to be stuck with this shit for a week.
HEY AMY! =)
I did a research paper on Arthur Rimbaud in high school, so naturally I discovered Baudelaire. That was the beginning of my love of poetry.
Si je trouve un amour semblable, je reverai de nouveau
Amy sorry I missed you as well
hello amyranth, hello martha.
TJ - I'm okay. How are you?
Hey Amy and BC
Toujours you already got caught once doing French signed in, why do you do it anonymously?
kapu was pressing refresh refresh refresh like always.
10 25 is a mad kapu pretending to be anonymous
Hallo MJ, PH, Teej, Elena, DW and Mayo!
How is everyone doing tonight?
-A
Mais, mes mots ne sera jamais trouve parce que personne ne m'ecoute
Lol noooo I just saw her do it once and I'm curios.
It's okay mj. Hey there. Hallo Amy! Hi grasshopper, TJ, elena, anons, anyone else I missed.
I'm okay
ne me quittez pas ne me quittez pas ne me quittez pas
vous etes si interesse
10:28: c n'est pas moi
*sighs*
This is sad, Mayo. What are you trying to prove? You are only driving the ones who care about you further away when you do this. When you encourage poetry.
Blogger Kapunua said...
Baudelaire, dude, les Fleurs du mal! ^_^ Mayo picked a good choice.
Let poetry flow here tomorrow, folks! :)
10:15 PM, October 16, 2008
Blogger sdock10 said...
Yep, yep Jules! Poetry it is!
10:20 PM, October 16, 2008
GLOAT GLOAT GLOAT GLOAT GLOAT
OMFG GROW UP PORKIES
Mayo is getting lazy. he doesn't want to write his own shit anymore.
Hay BC!
Martha, glad to hear it!
Elena, how are those kittens?
-A
I'm doing alright Amy! How the heck are YOU?
Vous me comprenez?
Respond-moi
Sont les mont qui vont tres bien ensemble....tres bien ensemble. ;)
.....um...my Michelle
PH, not too bad! Just listening to my neurotic cat howl at the front door. As soon as I open it, he'll take off upstairs. I think he thinks it's a game.
How about you? How's the nieceling?
-A
Hi everyone, i can not stay long, i am just trying to catch up.
So mayo's into the writings of
Mr. Millay, who would have known.
So how is everyone?
Oh and look at me.....IM IN BLUE!!!
Are you serious 10:20?
well, i love the poetry too. mayo has renewed my appreciation for it.
i've been translating the french as it comes up...it's beautiful. is it more baudelaire? i'm not familiar with poetry in other languages.
Frenchie you can stop now, nobody is translating that shit.
maybe....Ma Belle Ami....I'm in Love wit you.
10:32 On est - Sont les mots...
Awwh! My cat scratches on my door ALL night, until I either feed him or let him in my room. I hate sleeping with my cats though, they like to take over my bed.
And I am just dandy! Just trying to soothe my cramps. Haha. The nieceling is great actually. She's really gotten attached to me, I'm just amazed! I can't wait for Halloween, she's going to be a lion. RAWRRR<33
Hallo PJ IN BLUE!!
-A
10:34
yes. i want to read Mayo's words, not this shit.
LOL!
That wasn't her Aunt's influence at all was it?
-A
Hey PJ!
You look RAVISHING in blue. ^_~
How are you doing, dear?
The kittens are just fine Amy. Cute as can be!
I like poetry and I'm really confused as to why this is such a big deal. Mayo likes poetry it's not like we all don't know this fact. Damn, let the guy post what he likes.
TInk speaks french. Remember Gerard's girl friend while he was with Eliza???
Frenchie you can stop now, nobody is translating that shit.
Exactement!
Haha.
Not at all!
I took her for a walk in the stroller last week, and I'm teaching her how to rawr.
So far, it sounds more like a MEOW, but I'm determined to get it down by the 31st.
Damn, let the guy post what he likes.
Just not the Porkies.
But Amy doesn't like poetry. She hasn't commented on it at all. Can't you see it's not fair to her?
a timed post and it still proves my point
Hey good to see you PJ
Don't i tho!
I think even my eyes are blue tonight.
PH, how is everything?
I know i do not get around here much anymore, but i have missed all of you.
Mayo should be more considerate to those who really care about him and not just about getting his attention.
Hi PJ! Good to see you here. How are you doing grasshopper?
Amy likes poetry. She just doesn't like it ALL THE TIME the way THEY did it with the marathons of poetry and endless discussions of it. It makes her feel uncomfortable and that is her right.
Anonymous said...
But Amy doesn't like poetry. She hasn't commented on it at all. Can't you see it's not fair to her?
I haven't commented because I don't have anything useful to add to "Hey Mayo, nice poem".
Clearly, neither do you. :)
-A
Anonymous Anonymous said...
Mayo should be more considerate to those who really care about him and not just about getting his attention.
October 16, 2008 10:40 PM
QFT!!!
People who care enough to want to fix this blog!!
Vous etes tres amusants!
Je ris de vous!
:)
PJ, what have you been up to lately?
-A
10:34
yes. i want to read Mayo's words, not this shit.
October 16, 2008 10:37 PM
That was just beautiful! I bet mayo will post those lovely words on his blog next!
Hi Elena, im with you, it is his blog after all.
How are you....blows kiss!
How is everyone
10:41
i hope so.
PJ, I've missed you too. :(
We used to cross paths when I commented in the mornings before school! :(
How are you doing? It really is awesome to see you!!
BC, I'm just dandy. I'm trying not to eat my body-weight in chocolate. Some say it's good for cramps? Haha. How are you doing? =]
He's only encouraging the poetry crew to come back around and post endless poems again.
He should have just spoken to us and tried to clarify some stuff.
Hi Amy, just the same ole shit, getting ready to leave the states for a while.
How's things for you going?
Mayo is a mindfucker.
10:43 Maybe he just likes Baudelaire.
Blogger Kapunua said...
Oh my gosh, SOlly, they are insane.
And you know, the punchline is that I have yet to get a single honest--honest--response, as to why our poetry and games were "blather."
And why people can't just scroll past it if they don't like it.
10:42 PM, October 16, 2008
Look, now we are insane!!
Kap let me answre your question.
What's that? Scroll past it? You know, that would be a genius idea, if it didn't make up 75% of the blog replies. Ignore, ignore all you want, but it is still there. It's still used to derail current topics of conversation. It's used to force people to stop talking, and it's used for attention. It's beyond pathetic.
yeah, that was mayo's way of choosing the porchies. it's obvious. the bad guys win. again.
I remember PH, seems just yesterday i found this place, now it has been over a year.
We have come a long way, haven't we!
Attention?
Vous etes putains pour ce "Mayo"
Je ris de vous!
Hello PJ. I thought you were PH sorry
Could someone translate this
He's only encouraging the poetry crew to come back around and post endless poems again.
He should have just spoken to us and tried to clarify some stuff.
October 16, 2008 10:43 PM
He used to talk to us after he posts. I'm sure he read the stupid anon comments and it made him run off.
I just wonder whom Mayo is digging into. It just sounds creepy and reminds me of "Dig up Her Bones" by the Misfits.
Not doing too badly PJ!
Are you going on vacation, or is it business?
-A
I'm still dragging my ass in at ungodly hours, while you where going off to school, i was crawling for the bed.
But i aways found time to stop and chat.
The OPS were talking about the Misfits so it's probably to them.
10:46:
"I don't know you"
yeah, that was mayo's way of choosing the porchies. it's obvious. the bad guys win. again.
Then take the hint and back off.
Poor grasshopper. I'm feeling the same as you I'm afraid, and I'm being emo by writing in my diary lol.
*Blows Kiss to PJ*
I'm okay, thanks
How are you?
A long year, indeed PJ! When I found this blog, I was very scared to comment. The people who did comment, just said how they hated 'teenies' and I thought I'd be clumped in that group. I was intimidated by them and didn't think that I would be accepted. But I'm glad I finally did, because otherwise I wouldn't have 'met' some of you guys. =)
Yea Amy, it's business but i will be back and forth till the middle of March of next year.
It's boring really, not much to talk about.
What have you been up to?
It isn't nice to laugh at people. Just saying.
Who are we digging into Mayo?
The OPS were talking about the Misfits so it's probably to them.
October 16, 2008 10:48 PM
Omg i have a misfit t-shirt! He posted to me!
Martha, I almost called PJ, PH as well. lol.
BC, I haven't written in my diary in a few weeks! For a while, I'd write non-stop!
PJ, I loved talking to you in the mornings. =) You always said something to make me smile.
It isn't nice to laugh at people.
Ah! Tu parles francais?
10:48 Don't feel badly...no one does...thats not an accident.
PJ, not too much. Working, paying the bills and dealing with the occasional exploded oven. But good otherwise.
-A
I felt the same way, i was so shy talking on here, now i can say anything....lol
Funny, i never try and talk to Mayo, i guess im still weired when it comes to him, i care more about what is going on in here, than what is going on with him out there.
Mayo is digging into Eliza.
Oh holy shit, some of you anon's really need to grow up.
Mayo posts poetry so he's sending some message.
Hey how about he posted poetry because he liked it and wanted to share it with all of us? Oh no, can't think that can you? IT's gotta mean something deep and disturbing.
hey mayo, don't know if you're lurking or not, but truly, thnak you for sharing a favorite poem with us again.
personally, i needed beautiful words tonight, so your post is very welcome to me. the ugliness in here is not, though i'm glad to see my friends chatting with each other. i like that, even though i have very little to say.
writing this now -- it's not my good night -- because i'm off to get coffee and i sprained my ankle today so i'll be hobbling and it will take forever, and i didn't want all the petty snark to obscure the fact that your new post is very much appreciated.
thank you, mayo.
back soonish
Mayo is not the important one here, it's you, the community, don't you understand?
Mayo ne vous parle pas parc que il ne se soucie pas de vous
I would love to stay and make you all smile.
I know i say some really fucked up shit sometimes.
But that is just me being me!
And i have to go and take this call!
I will be back later!
Blows kiss!!!
My heart to yours
PJ
O_O
Teej, how did you sprain your ankle?
Elena, good point. Mayo's already said that "it's all about me" and I take that to heart.
-A
Goodnight PJ! We miss you!
-A
Mayo is the man behind the curtain.
10:50,
You have a misfits shirt? Me too! I even got the one with the blood dripping all over the skull and logo. It's in my garage somewhere.
PJ, I know how you feel. It's kind of weird when everyone get's all "OMG! MAYO!". I've never talked to the guy, I know nothing about him, he knows nothing about me. Yeah, I kind of care about him, because he pulled this place together, but I feel weirded out 'talking' to him too. They seem like a waste of words sometimes because I don't know when or if he will read them. That's why I was kind of shocked after he posted a silly little paragraph with 'advice' that I tell everyone. Really, that wasn't advice. To me, that's what I live from every single day.
Except it's really all about Amyranth and how "comfortable" she feels.
You mean woman
Bye PJ! *hug*
<33
Un certain Français oui.
Be back in a bit guys, need to shower.
I just get so bothered sometimes. I mean the guy posts something he likes and wants to share with us and it gets twisted into something bad.
Bye PJ Hope to talk to you soon.
Amyranth is getting hunted again. Maybe "dig into her" is all the attacks against Amyranth.
Goodnight PJ. I forgot to say hi TJ. Aw how did you sprain your ankle? :(
if mayo cared about everyone's feelings he wouldn't have posted a poem. saying he did it because he liked it implies he hasn't been aware of what's been going on here.
obviously he's choosing sides. he should just come right out with it.
I mean the guy posts something he likes and wants to share with us and it gets twisted into something bad.
Posting it for the Porkies and their poetry loving asses would indeed be bad.
No, I agree with you Elena.
You've got a good point there, and it's something that needs to be realized by everyone.
-A
What kind of post would please you?
Compris 10:55
Enjoy your shower grasshopper
Mayo said the blog belongs to us, so why should his posts be about him? He can't have it both ways.
Anon at 11:02
Really just stop.
YOU are trying to make this into something it's not. Stop trying to turn this into "taking sides"
Anyone who doesn't admit that this blog is a thousand times better since the porchies took their games and poems to the porch, is lying or blind.
LOL! 11:07 I only hope you are joking.
Mayo said the blog belongs to us, so why should his posts be about him? He can't have it both ways.
October 16, 2008 11:07 PM
Why don't you make your on blog and post what YOU want.
Alors, nous pouvons parler seul, 11:00
i'm confused. is the blog for mayo or is it for us? it seems he has contradicted himself a couple of times.
i'm back. that wasn't so bad.
to answer amyranth and bc, i don't know how i sprained it, tbh. just wrenched it something fierce this late afternoon. i wasn't even doing anything strenuous. i must be an utter moron to sprain my ankle doing nothing.
Mayo likes it both ways.
Why don't you make your on blog and post what YOU want.
Mayo said the blog belonged to us.
I dig weeds
LOL! 11:07 I only hope you are joking.
October 16, 2008 11:09 PM
I don't think she was...SCARY!
"i'm confused. is the blog for mayo or is it for us? it seems he has contradicted himself a couple of times."
depends on which mayo is typing
Mayo said the blog belonged to us.
October 16, 2008 11:11 PM
He said everyone was welcomed to post here.
First anon 11:09,
You gotta be kidding me. You got anons *still* constantly bitching and moaning almost on a daily basis, so how is the blog any better? Look around you. Anons are *still* complaining.
Teej, I've sprained both of my ankles numerous times. They're so stretched out now that I can walk on the sides of my feet.
Which is about as comfortable as you think it is :P
-A
BC, if you don't think it is a million times better without the porchies and their stupid games which compromised the integrity of the conversations then you are BLIND. Amy cleaned this place up.
amyranth, that sounds adorably freakish. ♥
A bientot! Je reviendrai...parc que je vous aime.
xoxox
Poor TJ. Take it easy with that ankle ok? *hugs*
MW
Mikey Way?
LOL Teej! Thanks!
The next time I do it, I'll point out that my buddy Teej thinks it's adorably freakish!
:D
-A
Mayonaise is for you to share, for everyone. It became more your home than mine, and that is amazing.
POSTED BY MAYONAISE AT WEDNESDAY, NOVEMBER 14, 2007
So you see, it's more about us and what we want...unless he changed his mind or was lying.
Most of us don't want the poetry. The majority of us.
its like magic
Well 11:16,
In my opinion this place would be a lot better if the anons would shut up with their constant complaining. It's just a freaking blog.
thanks. i will, bc. *hugs*
The blog is for ALL of us. That INCLUDES Mayo. He is part of this just like everyone else.
So he has every right to post things that he likes and wants to share.
I ♥ poetry
BC, if you don't think it is a million times better without the porchies and their stupid games which compromised the integrity of the conversations then you are BLIND. Amy cleaned this place up.
October 16, 2008 11:16 PM
You mean she gave the blog an enemia? LOL!
BC, if you don't think it is a million times better without the porchies and their stupid games which compromised the integrity of the conversations then you are BLIND. Amy cleaned this place up.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Place looks reeaaal clean, anon.
Keep in mind, Anonymous at 11:20, Mayo posted that comment over a year ago. Things change, people change.
In my opinion, as much as he says that this blog belongs to us, it will always be his. He has total control over this blog, and he knows it too.
Most of us don't want the poetry. The majority of us.
October 16, 2008 11:20 PM
Didn't your mother ever tell you that you can't have everthing you want?
Didn't your mother ever tell you that you can't have everthing you want?
Apparenty, Amy's mother never told her that.
I hope Mayo never stops posting exactly what he wants. Why should he pander to a bunch of ridiculous anons who don't even like him or his blog.
Night
i personally think it's ridiculous that we have a slew of anons who think they get a say in what gets posted here.
half the fun of a blog is seing what the author has to say, no matter what it is. that we get to hang out here and chat is a bonus.
get over yourselves, please.
Hey Mayo
Why don't you post a knock knock joke? Maybe that would please everyone. No on second thought I'm sure there would be someone who would bitch about it. Damned if you do and damned if you don't, man. Mayo, post whatever the hell you like. Cause you can't please all of the people all of the time.
seeing is usually spelled with two e's of course.
good night martha.
They would just say there was a message in the joke and ruin that too.
Just goes to show mature the majority of these anons are.
^how
Sleep well Martha!
Maybe some anons would shut up if Mayo actually spoke for once. If he actually like, told us how he felt about something going on here. We all just assume that he cares about the happenings in HIS blog, when really we know nothing.
Rawr. The cramps are shitty, and my head is spinning.
Goodnight one and all.
<3
Goodnight mj
Yep anon the joke would no doubt hold some secret meaning.
Night Martha
Goodnight MJ and PH!
-A
I doubt that would shut them up Paperheart. It appears they just like to whine.
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